Hi there!
This time I want to share with you a very useful resource that will help you improve your chances on getting a higher score in the TOEFL test: the Writing template.
I already mentioned Club-MBA, an online community for Spanish speakers that is looking better every day. In the TOEFL section of the community, you can find a Writing template, written by Rid. It’s been helping me a lot to prepare the Writing, here is the link: http://www.club-mba.com/foro/viewtopic.php?f=10&t=3.
I’ve been practicing with the template, and I have made some changes to it. Here is the result:
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I think this can help me get a good score in the Writing section. I just have two days to find out…
Reaching the Thirties 
good luck this saturday morning !! above all, keep calm and be confident of your chances and language skills ( Think that you are almost bilingual) and go for it!!!
we will in touch and I will keep up to date on my Toefl results.
All the best,
Jose
Thanks Jose!!
And good luck to you too!
Un abrazo!
Kike
it’s a wonderful template. but what’s your final score after using it ? .. i would really appreciate if you answered me
Hi Ahmed, I scores a 105, 25 in the writing section. You can see my full score in this post: https://reachingthethirties.wordpress.com/2011/03/08/i-got-my-toefl-scores/
Take care!
Hi! I’m writing this from Japan. Referring your template, I could dramatically improved my TOEFL iBT score. Thank you 🙂
You’re more than welcome! Congrats!
Thank you a lot! Did you also use this template when you took a TOEFL? In the case of mine, my score increased +10 points compared to not using your template. (from 11 to 21 !!)
Yeah, I used it, but I missed some points in one of the questions :S
Sorry for posting so many times. But I have a question about the structure of “Third paragraph” in Integrated Task. As you see, the part of sentence as following, “professor mentions …[x] …, the lecturer again….” is really correct?
What you really want to write is not “professor” but “article”, isn’t it?
It is correct! Lecturer is someone who is giving out an speech, in this case the professor. Does it make sense to you?
Yes, I understand the mean of “lecturer” is the “professor” in this case.
I just thought that correct sentence is NOT “the professor mentions that [x]. However, the lecturer again contradicts the claim as [y].” BUT “the reading passage mentions that [x].
However, the lecturer again contradicts the claim as [y].”
Adhering fundamentally to your way to compose the sentence, I thought it’s natural.
According to your sentence, the context of [x] is the professor’s support idea, and one of [y] is the article’s theory, right? If so, at the first seeing, at the first view, I couldn’t understand whose idea [y] is.
Sorry for posting many times, overall, your article extremely help me improve. So I really appreciate you. Thank you.
You’re welcome! And glad it helped!
Can i get that template free of cost as i couldn’t afford that.
Hi Theja,
You would need to contact the people at Club-MBA using this site: http://www.club-mba.com/contacto/